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Thursday, May 9, 2019

Ocean poem

3 comments:

  1. Hi leilani,
    I like the way you said in you ocean poem that the ocean is like a barrel of silk going across the world.

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  2. Hi Leilani I like your ocean poem, I like how you made your own waves that is very creative.
    From Calais

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