Last week my class has been given a picture to each person and each person has been writing about their picture and made it in to a poetry and this is mine .So what everyone had to do was to write down some nouns that you can see in the picture then you have to you have to describe the noun,after that we had to describe what is it doing in the picture than we wrote how was it doing what you wrote in the before this then if you wanted to you could do an ending bit for the end of your writing.Next time I do Poems I'd think I would write something like this because it makes look easier and faster.
Lupine with green tips standing still bravely,
Bushes with its beige colour swaying in the wind,
Rocks and its old cover tumbling down slowly like a couple of rocks
tumbling down a high mountain and ending up in the middle of
nowhere,
The mountains blackish,dull colours waiting still,for
The misty white colour gliding fast to travel to the other side,
I like how you put everything we needed to do in the processes of this piece of poetry writing.
ReplyDeleteLike your nouns, adjectives, verbs and adverbs.
plus you ended your sentences with a full stop and started them with a capital letter
Thank you for your comment I really appreciated that
ReplyDeleteI like that you described the colour of the bushes and how the Lupine swayed it was very descriptive
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