Watermelon description
It smells like a rotten rockmelon
The watermelon smells like?It smells like fresh water
but with some mango.
It taste like a sweet apple when I take a bite out of it.
but with some mango.
It taste like a sweet apple when I take a bite out of it.
The watermelon has curves and all types of patterns on it like
a picture because pictures have all types of patterns.
a picture because pictures have all types of patterns.
When the watermelon was cut it sounded like this ‘kkkkkkkkkkk’
just like how
tyres do when they are having a race our driving away
from the police.
just like how
tyres do when they are having a race our driving away
from the police.
The watermelon feels really weird because it has a crumbly
texture but its still stuck together.
texture but its still stuck together.
The colours on the hard skin are mixed together
with dark green,light green and a little neon green.
with dark green,light green and a little neon green.
The seeds are as hard as a rock.
When you look at the watermelon getting cut it looks juicy,reddish,
tender,moist,colourful.
tender,moist,colourful.
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ReplyDeleteI like the way you used descriptive words in your writing as well as it would paint a picture in the readers head and I liked how you put in how it smelt, taste and looked.
ReplyDeletethank you that is what i was aiming for in my writing piece.
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