Let go

Room 2 has been trying to make descriptive writing to make our writing better than before.We just needed to pick a day or a holiday that has gave us feelings like Sad/Scary or happy.So what we had to do was to make our piece of writing really descriptive.This is my writing.

“Aah” I say as the breeze passes me with confidents. As I

walk with my togs on I carefully swipe my towel on me before the wind
swipes

me first. I wait  til there is only one person left so that I can come in with them

at the same time because of ,when I walk in everyone is going looking at you…….

“Hey do you wanna come with” I said to my friend next to me, then she replied”

chur”,we all needed a partner to go with down this waikite valley inflatable balls

with water inside (hot water) .Suddenly our names were called out so then we

got

at the back of the truck and they drove up to the zorb balls filled with warm water

at the top of this hill (which makes it more enjoyable) .

We had to slip in to the inflatable ball ,when

we got in we fell face first .When we were ready shivers crossed me as i got ready

to tumble and drown, well at least I didn’t drown because that’s what I thought and
I also thought that I wouldn’t be able to breath so I took a deep breath and…..

Turns out I could actually could breathe but I still got water in my mouth.So when
we got to the end we had to hop out and it was freezing it was already raining,the
sun was faded away and the clouds start passing by wih tears.